Changes to the WASM stage of the Rust quickstart

docs/tutorial/rust/src/running_in_a_browser.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 # Running In A Browser Using WebAssembly
 
 The tutorial so far used `cargo run` to build and run the code as a native application.
-Native applications are the primary target of the Slint framework, but we also support WebAssembly
+Native applications are the primary target of the Slint framework, but it also supports WebAssembly
 for demonstration purposes. This section uses the standard rust tool `wasm-bindgen` and
 `wasm-pack` to run the game in the browser. Read the [wasm-bindgen documentation](https://rustwasm.github.io/docs/wasm-bindgen/examples/without-a-bundler.html)
 for more about using wasm and rust.
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Install `wasm-pack` using cargo:
 cargo install wasm-pack
 ```
 
-Edit the `Cargo.toml` to add the dependencies.
+Edit the `Cargo.toml` file to add the dependencies.
 
 ```toml
 [target.'cfg(target_arch = "wasm32")'.dependencies]
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ getrandom = { version = "0.2.2", features = ["js"] }
 when compiling for the wasm32 architecture. Note that the `rand` dependency is now duplicated,
 to enable the `"wasm-bindgen"` feature.
 
-While you are editing the `Cargo.toml``, make one last change. To turn the binary into
+While you are editing the `Cargo.toml`, make one last change. To turn the binary into
 a library by adding the following:
 
 ```toml
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ path = "src/main.rs"
 crate-type = ["cdylib"]
 ```
 
-This is needed because wasm-pack requires Rust to generate a `"cdylib"`.
+This is because wasm-pack requires Rust to generate a `"cdylib"`.
 
 You also need to change `main.rs` by adding the `wasm_bindgen(start)`
 attribute to the `main` function and export it with the `pub` keyword:
@@ -48,11 +48,11 @@ pub fn main() {
 }
 ```
 
-Now, you can compile the program with `wasm-pack build --release --target web`. This
+Compile the program with `wasm-pack build --release --target web`. This
 creates a `pkg` directory containing several files, including a `.js` file
 named after the program name that you need to import into an HTML file.
 
-Create a minimal `index.html` that declares a `<canvas>` element for rendering and loads the generated wasm
+Create a minimal `index.html` in the top level of the project that declares a `<canvas>` element for rendering and loads the generated wasm
 file. The Slint runtime expects the `<canvas>` element to have the id `id = "canvas"`.
 (Replace `memory.js` with the correct file name).
 
@@ -71,11 +71,11 @@ file. The Slint runtime expects the `<canvas>` element to have the id `id = "can
 ```
 
 Unfortunately, loading ES modules isn't allowed for files on the file system when accessed from a
-`file://` URL, so you can't simply load the index.html. Instead, you need to serve it through a web server.
+`file://` URL, so you can't load the `index.html`. Instead, you need to serve it through a web server.
 For example, using Python, by running:
 
 ```sh
 python3 -m http.server
 ```
 
-And now you can now access the game at [http://localhost:8000](http://localhost:8000/).
+Now you can access the game at [http://localhost:8000](http://localhost:8000/).